Saturday, November 29, 2003

Revision of the Poem

You are so well written
Your parenthesis brows
Compliment the main idea
Coming from your "i's"
Everything is alliterated, from
Your lungs, to your larynx, to your luscious lips

You are so well written
Healthy: I'm impressed by your colon usage
I prefix my eyes on your lovely face
And sweet-tailed suffix
Bringing up the rear
No fragments in your fluent lines.

You are so well written
I sound out the words
Will you spell it out for me?
Though your sentence structure is complete
The vocabulary is new
Can you read me?

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